Wednesday, December 16, 2009

Wistful



dreams and memories
litter that cold rocky shore-
blunt-edge beach glass shards

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I wrote this for the Haiku Bones prompt of wistful. Also:

4 comments:

Aulice Payne said...

Love that jarring last line. My wistful post also has a broken glass style metaphor

Tumblewords: said...

Stunning!Lots of wistful depth in those three lines.

Sandy, from fourwinds said...

Perfect haiku for the Maine coast.
I am inland about six miles, it is 8 degrees right now.

Nancy Bea Miller said...

Thanks so much everyone!